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Old Streetfighter Motorcycle Forum Post 02-27-2017, 11:40 AM   #1
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Hey guys, I need your help. I've been on here for a long time now, and I've built quite a few different bikes. I respect your guys' opinions because there's a lot of talent on here.

I just launched a new Youtube channel, and right now I'm featuring my café racer build. I just put up my third video on the new channel. I'd like to get your input on how I'm doing so far, what you'd change, what you think I'm doing well, ect...
Whatever you think, good or bad, if you would leave a comment either on the video itself or here on this page I'd really appreciate it. Thanks for taking the time guys!



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Old Streetfighter Motorcycle Forum Post 02-27-2017, 11:47 AM   #2
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hey bud, big fan of your projects, very nicely put together edit of actual work being done, and well worded and precisely thought out explanations

nice work! feels like it will be a very solid no bs kinda series

lookin forward to more
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Old Streetfighter Motorcycle Forum Post 02-27-2017, 12:16 PM   #3
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hey bud, big fan of your projects, very nicely put together edit of actual work being done, and well worded and precisely thought out explanations

nice work! feels like it will be a very solid no bs kinda series

lookin forward to more
Thanks man! definitely appreciate the comments. If you want to, go ahead and subscribe, I'm trying to get videos uploaded at least one every two weeks. Hoping to get it down to every week eventually. You guys know as well as anyone else that it's hard to get a bunch of stuff done when you're working a full time job and have a family. Except Yantosh, but he's not a real person, rather a bike building android
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Old Streetfighter Motorcycle Forum Post 02-27-2017, 05:39 PM   #4
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nice video would watch again.

Music choice is a huge deal. This was a good choice.


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Old Streetfighter Motorcycle Forum Post 02-27-2017, 05:41 PM   #5
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not had 2 min to watch the vid, bike looks cool tho
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Old Streetfighter Motorcycle Forum Post 02-27-2017, 07:19 PM   #6
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I'll be putting up videos of my winter build off bike in a couple weeks. one more episode of the café bike, then it'll be on to the build-off bike because I pretty much haven't done anything with it yet

If you guys could do me a favor, if you like the video, could you hit the "thumbs up" button just below the vid? It would help me out a lot. Thanks again for watching. Also, feel free to add some criticism, I've got pretty thick skin these days, I'm a dealership mechanic haha.
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Old Streetfighter Motorcycle Forum Post 02-27-2017, 10:09 PM   #7
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Are you trying to monetize your channel or just post vids of your work?

If you are trying to monetize here are my suggestions:

1) State your name at the beginning of the vids. "Hey, Bob with 13 Motorsports here." I think being personable attracts people to come back.
2) Talk more during work or narrate when editing. The welding of the top shock mount needed some spice, same with when you showed the camera your welded stem.
3) Uncover the other bike. I think it would create interest, makes the garage look cooler especially with that truck in there. Hide the girls bicycle.
4) Paint the ceiling, even if it is just white primer . Your garage looks great, but there are a few shots where you show the ceiling and it detracts from the feel of your shop.
5) Consider getting a lapel mic. I have no idea how these hook up to whatever video device you are using, but I think it would really enhance the videos.
6) I think you would appeal to a larger audience if you explained some terms. 7 years ago I would have no idea what "turn down" meant. This kind of circles back to #2

Good work! I subscribed and liked.

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Old Streetfighter Motorcycle Forum Post 02-28-2017, 12:39 AM   #8
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Fantastic input man thank you! I do have a lapel mike that I used in my first video, this time I was trying a different mike and it obviously wasn't as good. I'm going to go back to the wireless mike on the next vid.
Yes, hide the daughter's bike and hide the cat litter box haha.
I definitely agree there were a couple stale spots in the vide, i'll work on that as well.

All that is exactly what I was looking for, so thanks again.
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iļl just rant about bike. take the fail piece higher, so it flows with the tank lower line



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I subscribed hit the bell liked etc... Nice video. I left a few comments because you did not have many he he he.

Its not that I was doing a hand stand on the bike at the time.... it was the fact the bike had left the track and was now traveling leteral a few feet off the ground.
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